[Hidden-tech] Looking for feedback on headline for socialentrepreneurship website

[Harry Flood]

May be picky but stylistically I have never liked seeing all the words in a
caption capitalized. Maybe took too many English classes, lol.

Harry

Harry J Flood
CFO, Mediaspectrum, Inc.


On Thu, Jul 25, 2019 at 3:05 PM dlesser--- via Hidden-discuss <
hidden-discuss at lists.hidden-tech.net> wrote:

> How to Help the World and Still Be Profitable
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> Don Lesser
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> *From:* Hidden-discuss <hidden-discuss-bounces at lists.hidden-tech.net> *On
> Behalf Of *Stefan Gonick via Hidden-discuss
> *Sent:* Thursday, July 25, 2019 2:06 PM
> *To:* Greg Caulton <greg at gregcaulton.com>; Alan Frank <alan at 8wheels.org>
> *Cc:* Hidden-Tech Tech <hidden-discuss at lists.hidden-tech.net>
> *Subject:* Re: [Hidden-tech] Looking for feedback on headline for
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> How to Help the World and Still Have a Profitable Business
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> A bit more succinct...
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> How Your Business Can Make a Difference on the Things that REALLY
> Matter...And Thrive Financially At the Same Time
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> In general, I prefer statements to questions. It feels more like a promise
> being offered than a question being posed.
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> *From*: "Alan Frank via Hidden-discuss" <
> hidden-discuss at lists.hidden-tech.net>
> *Sent*: Thursday, July 25, 2019 1:33 PM
> *To*: "Greg Caulton" <greg at gregcaulton.com>
> *Cc*: "Hidden-Tech Tech" <hidden-discuss at lists.hidden-tech.net>
> *Subject*: Re: [Hidden-tech] Looking for feedback on headline for
> socialentrepreneurship website
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> +1 on these two which are relatively succinct. No particular preference
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> How Can You Help the World and Still Have a Profitable Business?
> How You Can Help the World and Still Have a Profitable Business
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> -1 on anything with "secret" which sounds like clickbait.
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> >> On Jul 25, 2019, at 8:00 AM, Shel Horowitz via Hidden-discuss
> >> <hidden-discuss at lists.hidden-tech.net> wrote:
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> >> Looking for feedback on the new lead headline for my main website.
> >> The body text will be different depending on which headline I run
> >> with. Please tell me why you chose the one you did. Additional
> >> suggestions or "I hate this one" also welcome. How Can You Help the
> >> World and Still Have a Profitable Business? How Can Your Business
> >> Make a Difference on the Things that REALLY Matter—And Thrive
> >> Financially—At the Same Time? Can Your Social and Environmental
> >> Commitments Help Your Business Thrive? Can Being a Hero to the
> >> Planet and Its People Make Your Business More Profitable? “How Can
> >> I Make a Difference in the World AND A Good Profit?” How You Can
> >> Help the World and Still Have a Profitable Business How Can You Help
> >> the World While Building a Profitable Business How Can You Help the
> >> World While Building a Thriving Business How Your Business Can
> >> Thrive as it Makes a Difference in the World How Can Your Business
> >> Thrive as it Makes a Difference in the World? How to Turn Your
> >> Social and Environmental Values into Profits “How Can I Turn My
> >> Social and Environmental Values into Profits?”
> >> Social Entrepreneurship: The Surprising Secret of So Many Profitable
> >> Businesses
> >> Social Entrepreneurship: A Surprising Secret of Business Success
> >> Social Justice, Planetary Healing—and PROFIT: Three Legs of
> >> Business Success
> >> Are You a SECRET Social Entrepreneur?
> >> Why are you Keeping Your Social Entrepreneurship a Secret?
> >> Change the World AND Create a Thriving Business!
> >> Change the World AND Make Good Profit!
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> >> Shel Horowitz - "The Transformpreneur"(sm)
> >> ________________________________________________
> >> Watch (and please share) my TEDx Talk,
> >> "Impossible is a Dare: Business for a Better World"
> >> http://www.ted.com/tedx/events/11809 [1]
> >> (move your mouse to "event videos")
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> >> Contact me to bake in profitability while addressing hunger,
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> >> poverty, war, and catastrophic climate change
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> >> Twitter: @shelhorowitz
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> >> * First business ever to be Green America Gold Certified
> >> * Inducted into the National Environmental Hall of Fame
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> >> http://goingbeyondsustainability.com [2]
> >> mailto:shel at greenandprofitable.com <shel at greenandprofitable.com> *
> 413-586-2388 [3]
> >> Award-winning, best-selling author of 10 books. Latest:
> >> Guerrilla Marketing to Heal the World (co-authored with Jay Conrad
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> > [2] http://goingbeyondsustainability.com/
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Harry J Flood
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