[Hidden-tech] Which of these tag lines do you like better, and why?

[Michael Muller]

Shel,

Leading with "Profit by..." puts a bad taste in my mouth, to be honest. 
Give the endeavor a bad connotation.

"Help Heal", while a noble cause, sounds a little too ... something. Naive?

"Address Hunger, Poverty, War, Climate Change — and Profit" is more 
roll-up-your-sleeves sounding.

My 2c.

Mik Muller, owner
Montague WebWorks
(413) 320-5336
http://MontagueWebWorks.com
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On 4/2/2016 1:07 PM, Shel Horowitz wrote:
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> It's time for me to do new business cards:
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> 1. At the top,
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> 2. In the middle, a tag line, and that's where I want advice. I am 
> considering these (open to other ideas, too)--what do you think:
> Profit by Repairing Hunger/ Poverty/War/Climate Change
> Profit by Healing Hunger/ Poverty/War/Climate Change
> Help Heal Hunger/Poverty/ War/Climate Change—and Profit
> Address Hunger/Poverty/ War/Climate Change—and Profit
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> Bottom: contact info, book title, and URL for TEDx talk
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