[Hidden-tech] Looking for feedback on headline for socialentrepreneurship website

[Stefan Gonick]

How to Help the World and Still Have a Profitable Business
  
 A bit more succinct...
  
 or 
  
 How Your Business Can Make a Difference on the Things that REALLY Matter...And Thrive Financially At the Same Time
  
 In general, I prefer statements to questions. It feels more like a promise being offered than a question being posed.
  
  
 Stefan

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 From: "Alan Frank via Hidden-discuss" <hidden-discuss at lists.hidden-tech.net>
Sent: Thursday, July 25, 2019 1:33 PM
To: "Greg Caulton" <greg at gregcaulton.com>
Cc: "Hidden-Tech Tech" <hidden-discuss at lists.hidden-tech.net>
Subject: Re: [Hidden-tech] Looking for feedback on headline for socialentrepreneurship website   
+1 on these two which are relatively succinct. No particular preference
between them.
How Can You Help the World and Still Have a Profitable Business?
How You Can Help the World and Still Have a Profitable Business

-1 on anything with "secret" which sounds like clickbait.

>> On Jul 25, 2019, at 8:00 AM, Shel Horowitz via Hidden-discuss
>> <hidden-discuss at lists.hidden-tech.net> wrote:
>>
>> Looking for feedback on the new lead headline for my main website.
>> The body text will be different depending on which headline I run
>> with. Please tell me why you chose the one you did. Additional
>> suggestions or "I hate this one" also welcome. How Can You Help the
>> World and Still Have a Profitable Business? How Can Your Business
>> Make a Difference on the Things that REALLY Matter-And Thrive
>> Financially-At the Same Time? Can Your Social and Environmental
>> Commitments Help Your Business Thrive? Can Being a Hero to the
>> Planet and Its People Make Your Business More Profitable? "How Can
>> I Make a Difference in the World AND A Good Profit?" How You Can
>> Help the World and Still Have a Profitable Business How Can You Help
>> the World While Building a Profitable Business How Can You Help the
>> World While Building a Thriving Business How Your Business Can
>> Thrive as it Makes a Difference in the World How Can Your Business
>> Thrive as it Makes a Difference in the World? How to Turn Your
>> Social and Environmental Values into Profits "How Can I Turn My
>> Social and Environmental Values into Profits?"
>> Social Entrepreneurship: The Surprising Secret of So Many Profitable
>> Businesses
>> Social Entrepreneurship: A Surprising Secret of Business Success
>> Social Justice, Planetary Healing-and PROFIT: Three Legs of
>> Business Success
>> Are You a SECRET Social Entrepreneur?
>> Why are you Keeping Your Social Entrepreneurship a Secret?
>> Change the World AND Create a Thriving Business!
>> Change the World AND Make Good Profit!
>>
>> Shel Horowitz - "The Transformpreneur"(sm)
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>>
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